And I love your art style!
Yeah, some other people mentioned that it was hard to remember their names as well. It's one of the problems I've come to realize with chapter one, so I'm trying to improve on that. ^^ It's just hard trying to make it not sound forced.
probably because I'm used to her looking like she has mascara on
"Uned ey Zayel" Kingdom represents the bears, cats, and eagles, so it's not a mix of bird species. Other species of birds do exist in this world, but they don't have the same intelligence or powers as the main species. ^^
Again, I really like that each of the ECLIPZAs represent an aspect of their people.
I noticed something, though, about the dialogue of this page. When they are naming the Eclipza(s?), I noticed that some are labeled "Name the animal" while others are labeled as "Name the Animal". You see, the capitalization is inconsistent. If you're treating things like "Courage the wolf" as a title, then the word "Wolf" would be capitalized: "Courage the Wolf". However, if they are just saying what species they are and it's not part of the Eclipzas' title, then all of the animal species words on this page should be lowercase (like Elation the Cat).
Thank you for pointing that out!
I forgot to fix that while editing |D lol It's fixed now. ^^
Keep up the outstanding work!
Elation. Courage. Love. Ire. Poignancy. Zen. Awe.